Poem= Weep away the night

[Shadow]

Originally Posted by khaotik

Nice .
Your daughter has a good telnt too.
I'd have to say their is a writer in all of us, but most of us have no idea how to tap it.

LOL Khaotik

Lisa= Shadow

smiles

I like that one smiles

[khaotik]

oooo my bad.
Hey dont hate =]
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Not my fault I dont think of Lisa as Shadow.. or wicked..
Cmon now!
you never know =]

[Foxgguy2001]

wow khaotik, darklight telar'aii was very impressive. Very much enjoyed the read on that one. Well done.

Most of mine involve god and religion..

So,

In the beginning, lord,

Creator of all things,

Transcendent of time, of space,

You created time, existence,

The angels, and the human race.



Creator of all things,

Lord of all,

Instiller of Iniquity,

Responsible for the fall?

Of one perfect angel.



Creator of all things,

Both compassionate and wrathful,

Did you have control of iniquity,

When it was 'found' with certainty?

Oh tarnished Lucifer, with impurity.



Creator of all things,

Whose will was this?

To the angels, did free-will exist?

Why was there no offered salvation,

For yet another imperfect creation?



Creator of all things,

Ruler of fallen man,

Whose deviation in Eden,

Caused awry, this Godly plan.

Can you make us understand?

Give us free-will, and then demand?



Creator of all things,

Both hell, and of heaven,

What justice have you reaped?

Two imperfect creations,

And not success of which to speak?



Creator of all things,

Instiller of free will,

Who gives humanity selection,

And when utilized,

Condemned to hell.



Creator of all things,

With your most perfect will,

To what do we attribute your perfection,

As we've not seen it still.



Creator of all things,

Who alone resides in perfection,

All things created,

Soon fall, to misdirection.



Creator of all things,

Knowledge of all,

Please explain this mystery of iniquity,

And why you claim no responsibility,

For this impurity,

Which be default you've created,

For this impure humanity,

Long since debated.

For my birth in sin,



Having sought it not,

I ask you again…

Explain this creation,

Who perpetrated this misinterpretation?

That you can know all things,

That you can be before time,

And can be without end,

That you create all things,

And then throw up your hands,

Only when things go awry.



Where is your accountability,

In your perfect will, are you not the creator,

The originator, the perpetrator?

Tell me God, give me clarity,

That I might understand this,



This conflicted nature,

When in your midst,

The Angels, the world, humanity fell,

And your perfect will, condemns us to hell,

So much for accountability,



Speak to me, oh, God!

Speak to me.



This life has already been an eternity,

Searching for truth…

[makoto]

Nice Foxgguy, great words! Those are some of the questions I always asked.

Shadow, that was really beautiful. The Love for your soul mate.

I didn't know there was so many deep thinkers here and good writers, my compliments to you all. cheers

[khaotik]

Thank you Foxyguy and Makoto,
Darklight telara'ai its a very deep one.. means more than most know,

[Shadow]

Agreed, there are many talents from in NS, and just being able to be a part of ones thoughts makes me feel honored and prod.

Most people will go a life time with out telling or showing what they are capable of writing because usually it is there deepest thoughts.


What we have been reading truly shows me more and more how we all have grown, and are able to understand a little bit more of each and every person that contributes.

I can honestly say I feel honored.

Thank you Makoto, for the very kind words.....I wrote that when I was around Khaotik age and back then I used to write lots now not so much.

[robber120]

I've actually read on your MySpace blog.
Excellent work you have.

[khaotik]

Thank you =]
Myspace bloggin, ftw.
lol

[Grape]

Well since everyone else is doing it, here are some poems I wrote on Death. Believe it or not they were for school.

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“Welcome to Darkness”

Welcome to Darkness
That lonely place in your mind,
That lonely place where you go
And hide,
When someone you love has died.

Welcome to Darkness
Have you been here before,
Or have you never left?

Have you been running
running,
running,
Trying to escape the pain,
That empty, unnerving feeling,
That void something.

Welcome to Darkness,
Have you been here before,
Or is this where you’ve been kept?

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“A Useless Piece of Glass”

I look through this window, alone,
Wondering what I could have done
To stop this onslaught of emotion,
I haven’t the slightest notion.

This window allows me,
Through lifetimes of practice, approaching infinity,
To see my ill future,
Which depicts an ominous conjecture.

A death has occurred
In my mind, troubles stir,
Perhaps a new life?
No, mine is filled with strife.

Chaos, confusion and danger,
A confused heart rampages with restless anger,
My soul beaten and battered,
This opaque window has shattered.

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“Brightest Ray of Gray”

Never forgotten or created,
Indefinitely pursuing those elated,

A radiant obsidian sun,

A heavenly choir of none.

Glistening is the beam of light,
Lightning strikes fading toward White.

A ray of Gray,
Or a sparkling White,
Being chased away,
By an envious Black light?
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by Richard B. IV, a.k.a Grape

[Foxgguy2001]

wow, that "Brightest Ray of Gray" is epic. Going to add that one to the favs. I especially like the last stanza... well done...very well done.